Yeah, I plan to wait untill I've read the whole book before reviewing, I can already see a few things that need improvement, but since you've already written the entire story, there's a good chance these improvements will occur in later chapters, so I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and refrain from critiscising untill I've read the whole thing.

Don't get me wrong though, I think Book four is your best work yet and Alex was awesome last chapter, Talking down Mary and using Larry's own pride to get him to cover for her.

Her dad would be proud.

Lunacorva