http://rheymus.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] rheymus.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] inverarity 2012-06-09 08:26 pm (UTC)

Alex/Anna would be nice, but it is being continually Jossed. Alex always kisses her friends ON THE CHEEK. A cheek kiss is always friendly; a tongue kiss is always sexy; a lips kiss could go either way; a kiss with no geographical location stated could go either way and let the Audience imagine what they will.

Geming said Alex/Anna friendship was a good thing because Anna needs to be more troublesome and Alex needs to be less troublesome. But it hain't happened. The Story needs troublesome students, because obedient students hain't a story. If Alex/Anna balanced each other, then there would still be enough troublesome to drive the story.

Stars Above, Alex was TOO brattish. Ifn I had been Grimm, I would have expelled Alex in chapter 1.

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