ext_60894 ([identity profile] gelsey.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] inverarity 2015-05-02 02:57 am (UTC)

It wasn't nearly as good as the first and I admit I was rather disappointed. I felt he asked for waaay too much suspension of disbelief and that it was too all over the place and in places didn't make complete sense.


So, decent but not great. Rather kludged together if you ask me, and too spread out. It would have benefited greatly from some tightening up and focus.
I hope whatever the next one is is better, but I'll go into it with much lower expectations.


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