Someone wrote in [personal profile] inverarity 2010-05-07 11:11 pm (UTC)

Re: Chapter 20 Review

Well, you are right that it does do a little bit of world-building.

As for point two, though, I don't think we really need another reminder that Max's death is constantly on her mind. That's obvious enough already.

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