Ouch! I always enjoy reading these reviews, although I usually have no idea what you are talking about since writing is not my area of expertise at all. However, I was wondering what you would think of this fic. I read a lot of next-gen fics, but this one seems very promising.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6043716/1/Rose_Weasley_and_the_Callamitus_Clause