This is off-topic, but I didn't think it was important enough to warrant an email. I have been reading your Alexander Quick stories and they're amazing. One thing, though: bemused means bewildered or preoccupied. Bemused does not mean amused.

It's a little thing, but I come across it every few chapters and it pulls me right out of your wonderful writing. I'm not how you feel about editing finished work, but I'd be very pleased if you'd take this post in consideration when writing the second draft of your next work. Thank you for doing what you do.