I have to second Ascot, it's not clear that the two men who materialized were speaking to each other. Adding a little something that made it clearer that they either didn't see Alex or weren't talking to her. The first reading was that they were Aurors responding to the trace. It became clear what they were after I knew what happened to them.
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Lack of clarity
Date: 2012-03-26 07:35 pm (UTC)Alex kicked some serious ass in this chapter.
--merkin