lol, it WOULD be like alexandra to want to rush into things practically her first/non long distance relationship...
again, i like the balance you strike here in being realistic about thing things that kids at that age do without being over detailed like ahem, much of fanfic.
larry albo continues to intrigues me...
and the thought of mummy zombie baby lurking in the woods is super creepy :/
Hmmmmmmm the ending was a bit of a surprise, but mostly this chapter was really funny, and revealing in a couple of ways. Kind of weird that Alex sensed that maybe that mummy thing followed her to Charmbridge......or was led to Charmbridge by someone. It's unfortunate that her little dueling club was stopped before it got a firm foundation on making them better at dueling. The incident with the stone bust was hilarious, and the final reveal about what Alex's gonna do...weeeeeelllll....u might have to post a warning to underage readers about what MIGHT/WILL happen. I feel bad for Sonja, a dance is a bad time to get the shaft relationship wise. Now..I'm wondering what will happen next....ooooooo Friday is only 4 days away......but then it's another LOOOOONG wait for the next book since this one is only what...42 chappies long?!?!?!?! I'm treasuring every chapter, and will probably re-read all four books till the next book comes out...and HHD to top it off.....GREAT WRITING Inverarity! Counting down also to the next Quick-E CON!!! I'll be at least at the hotel for one day at CapClave
Goes to Dark Lord Potter w/ bowl of popcorn, watches.
I'm sure the next night's proceedings will be interupted because nothing promised in the proceeding chapter takes place as planned in the Inverityverse. This is rule one of said universe.
This is a strength of you writing in the sense that every chapter has me waiting with baited breath for the next chapter. However, it might not be as effective if your 'other project' is a published work where we wouldn't have to wait.
So whats up with Anna anyway? Is she just being a friend, or do I sense something more in her reaction to Alex's plan to do it with Torvald?
I think Larry is actually being nice to Alex, though he tries his best not to show it.
Can't wait to see what happens with the naming of Alex by C&F. I hope their grannies are not trying to take advantage of Alex. I know C&F wouldn't try to hurt her, but I am not so sure about the grannies.
Somehow I doubt Alex will go through with it. I noticed how many people find the Alex/Torvald relationship out of the blue, he's always had a soft spot for her though ever since 6th grade, while he was shuffling her closer to Larry (the whole rat thing). He went out of his way to tell her that he quit MMS after she did, he truly wanted her to know and not think him a total 'sick creep' as she had accused the MMS members of being.
Not to mention he did ask her to dance in all of both winter balls she attended. But i do agree that he is a bit bland for being a trickster. Would have been nice if we'd actually seen or at least heard of his mischief before stars above. A simple run in outside the deans office would have been ok.
That creepy baby mummy following her is curious. It does accent that perhaps it wasn't John trying to kill her earlier. My theory is that it was someone within the original Thorn Circle - the person who might have tried to obliviate Alex as a baby only to have the spell deflect upon Hecate. Someone who would be very angry with Alexandra for giving his name to the Aurors...
What really bothers me though is that i have this horrible feeling that Abraham Thorn is going to die. I really hope I'm wrong on this prediction, because despite being a terrorist, he is one of my favorite characters. But we have seen more of him in this book than all the others combined - and we're to see him again soon. The whole bit with Caudia and Livia getting closer again, Alex exploring with boys, and Abrahams promise that he would die for any of his children just seems to support this, and build a platform to help her cope with her fathers death.
Another great chapter at keeping up with the "normal" happenings at Charmbridge. Alex does seem a bit young for sex so Anna's reaction is reasonable. But once you consider that she feels she doesn't have that much time left then it makes more sense. I was thinking that she was interested in contraception after learning about her mother. I am a bit surprised that she would so readily agree to being Named by the grannies. She has been used by so many people before. Love the comment on once a boy kisses you,he thinks he has to protect you.
Yeah, it looks like it. Although I didn't really see it before now. Many readers have talked about Alex/Anna before, but I only saw it after reading the last couple of chapters.
I don't think Abraham will kick the can....until book six or seven. He's basically too important. His death will probably cure Alex's seven year expiration date problem.
Torvald has 'red shirt' written all over him, though part of me hopes you fake a Cedric and let him live.
Fed mummy baby my roommate. Have figured out this is probably one of John's close relatives or a mummified Anasazi corpse. Judging from Henry Tsotsi's comments I think it is a close relative.
Alex does seem young at 14, but then if I remember what I was thinking about when I was 14 I can recall that sex was pretty high on the list. But its an age with a lot of variation in physical maturity too... Never mind the mental maturity.
I think that Alex and Larry will eventually wind up together... Or at least have a passionate kiss.
Alex and Larry, that'd be something. Larry has been acting a bit strange around Alex, but there isn't really anything to say that Alex would reciprocate even if Larry actually did like her.
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again, i like the balance you strike here in being realistic about thing things that kids at that age do without being over detailed like ahem, much of fanfic.
larry albo continues to intrigues me...
and the thought of mummy zombie baby lurking in the woods is super creepy :/
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I'm sure the next night's proceedings will be interupted because nothing promised in the proceeding chapter takes place as planned in the Inverityverse. This is rule one of said universe.
This is a strength of you writing in the sense that every chapter has me waiting with baited breath for the next chapter. However, it might not be as effective if your 'other project' is a published work where we wouldn't have to wait.
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I think Larry is actually being nice to Alex, though he tries his best not to show it.
Can't wait to see what happens with the naming of Alex by C&F. I hope their grannies are not trying to take advantage of Alex. I know C&F wouldn't try to hurt her, but I am not so sure about the grannies.
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(Anonymous) 2012-04-16 10:24 pm (UTC)(link)Not to mention he did ask her to dance in all of both winter balls she attended. But i do agree that he is a bit bland for being a trickster. Would have been nice if we'd actually seen or at least heard of his mischief before stars above. A simple run in outside the deans office would have been ok.
That creepy baby mummy following her is curious. It does accent that perhaps it wasn't John trying to kill her earlier. My theory is that it was someone within the original Thorn Circle - the person who might have tried to obliviate Alex as a baby only to have the spell deflect upon Hecate. Someone who would be very angry with Alexandra for giving his name to the Aurors...
What really bothers me though is that i have this horrible feeling that Abraham Thorn is going to die. I really hope I'm wrong on this prediction, because despite being a terrorist, he is one of my favorite characters. But we have seen more of him in this book than all the others combined - and we're to see him again soon. The whole bit with Caudia and Livia getting closer again, Alex exploring with boys, and Abrahams promise that he would die for any of his children just seems to support this, and build a platform to help her cope with her fathers death.
So... I do hope it's Torvald that kicks the can.
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I hope you are wrong too, btw. Just reading this and thinking of Abraham keeling over makes me sad :[
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Torvald has 'red shirt' written all over him, though part of me hopes you fake a Cedric and let him live.
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I think that Alex and Larry will eventually wind up together... Or at least have a passionate kiss.
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