This might just be me not having English for a first language, but on page 2 the sentence: "none of which made for particularly good camouflage in the brown rushes surrounding the pond"; shouldn't that be brushes instead of rushes? (also, I'm not looking for a final final copy, just decided to try my hand at some proofreading)
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Date: 2020-07-05 04:24 pm (UTC)rushes surrounding the pond"; shouldn't that be brushes instead of rushes? (also, I'm not looking for a final final copy, just decided to try my hand at some proofreading)