[identity profile] hermoinejean7.livejournal.com 2009-05-17 02:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Good Lord! This chapter probably required a "Tissues Absolutely Necessary" warning.

Seriously, I just read the chapter, and as you can guess by my above comment, that was one of the most moving moments ever. At least, for me. I think I need to compose my thoughts coherently into a review, but as of now, I don't even think the shock has worn off. >.<

I won't say I didn't expect it, because I did (there was a "Character Death" warning on the story, after all...), but then again, I don't think that I ever expected the death to be this emotionally moving. I thought that this chapter was powerfully written, and emotionally charged to the core.

I can't help but be a little mad at you for killing off Max, though I knew it was bound to happen. I liked him a lot. He was such a likable character!

[identity profile] inverarity68.livejournal.com 2009-05-17 06:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, he was. And I knew a lot of readers wouldn't be happy with me for killing him off. But it had to happen.

Thanks for the comments. (Sometimes I wonder if anyone actually looks at this LJ at all! :O)

(Anonymous) 2009-05-21 02:57 am (UTC)(link)
The pictures look better here than they do on Flickr; I just always comment over on ff.net because it's easier because that's where my new chapter alerts come from.

PrincessP

[identity profile] inverarity68.livejournal.com 2009-05-21 03:23 am (UTC)(link)
That's cool -- I'm not actually complaining about people not commenting here. I like reviews wherever they're posted. :)