Well, the trouble with trying to make fantasy or superhero stories coherent is that however hard you try....
The artwork is terrific. I love the way the characters move and act, and even though Charlie in the alexandra pics is hardly more than a few strokes of a thick brush, they are strokes that live and move. I think the Pritchards look a bit too Scandinavian for my taste (and I can't imagine them without freckles!), and was it your idea that one of them should be left-handed? But never mind these quibbles, with this guy you've struck oil, and if I ever wanted to try again to do a mini-series I would ask for his/her address.
I tried to say all this hours ago, but Livejournal has been in an extended snit and has managed to delete two successive versions of this comment. In fact I've had time to completely lose one computer and reload Windows from the start in another, so LJ has been really really naughty. I'm wondering whether it is time to start again somewhere else, but I like the format and I hate to drop a whole environment of friends and such.
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Date: 2011-04-04 08:46 pm (UTC)The artwork is terrific. I love the way the characters move and act, and even though Charlie in the alexandra pics is hardly more than a few strokes of a thick brush, they are strokes that live and move. I think the Pritchards look a bit too Scandinavian for my taste (and I can't imagine them without freckles!), and was it your idea that one of them should be left-handed? But never mind these quibbles, with this guy you've struck oil, and if I ever wanted to try again to do a mini-series I would ask for his/her address.
I tried to say all this hours ago, but Livejournal has been in an extended snit and has managed to delete two successive versions of this comment. In fact I've had time to completely lose one computer and reload Windows from the start in another, so LJ has been really really naughty. I'm wondering whether it is time to start again somewhere else, but I like the format and I hate to drop a whole environment of friends and such.