Inverarity is not a Scottish village

Let's see. There's a lot of Grimm in there, but they are cheating, since they are two sharing the same name. But I see that Brian's name is bigger than Payton's, even though Brian is a muggle and they hardly spoke to each other since Alexandra first left for Charmbridge. Abraham continues to be an absent father, as we see from the insignificant size of his name, heck, it's a small as Archie's, though that's artificially deflated, since she obviously doesn't call her father by his first name.

Now if we could get our hands on two advance chapters ...

Keep it up,

--Geneva