Good Lord! This chapter probably required a "Tissues Absolutely Necessary" warning.
Seriously, I just read the chapter, and as you can guess by my above comment, that was one of the most moving moments ever. At least, for me. I think I need to compose my thoughts coherently into a review, but as of now, I don't even think the shock has worn off. >.<
I won't say I didn't expect it, because I did (there was a "Character Death" warning on the story, after all...), but then again, I don't think that I ever expected the death to be this emotionally moving. I thought that this chapter was powerfully written, and emotionally charged to the core.
I can't help but be a little mad at you for killing off Max, though I knew it was bound to happen. I liked him a lot. He was such a likable character!
The pictures look better here than they do on Flickr; I just always comment over on ff.net because it's easier because that's where my new chapter alerts come from.
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Date: 2009-05-17 02:45 pm (UTC)Seriously, I just read the chapter, and as you can guess by my above comment, that was one of the most moving moments ever. At least, for me. I think I need to compose my thoughts coherently into a review, but as of now, I don't even think the shock has worn off. >.<
I won't say I didn't expect it, because I did (there was a "Character Death" warning on the story, after all...), but then again, I don't think that I ever expected the death to be this emotionally moving. I thought that this chapter was powerfully written, and emotionally charged to the core.
I can't help but be a little mad at you for killing off Max, though I knew it was bound to happen. I liked him a lot. He was such a likable character!
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Date: 2009-05-17 06:18 pm (UTC)Thanks for the comments. (Sometimes I wonder if anyone actually looks at this LJ at all! :O)
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Date: 2009-05-21 02:57 am (UTC)PrincessP
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Date: 2009-05-21 03:23 am (UTC)