Illustration acted as a spoiler and I basically 'knew' there would be a hag in this chapter and in the candy factory when it was introduced.. I like how naked she feels without her wand. Liked the picture of Constance and Forbearance sent. It's telling. Liked how Brian is curious and is really trying to be a friend, and how Brian's Mom's rule creates a girl/guy awareness that they didn't have when they were younger.
Okay, we know Alex will not be eaten by the hag. This is good.
"She doesn't get eaten by the hag at this time." "What?" "The hag doesn't get her. I'm explaining to you because you look a bit nervous." "I wasn't nervous. Maybe I was a little bit 'concerned' but that's not the same thing."
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Date: 2012-02-24 03:45 pm (UTC)I like how naked she feels without her wand. Liked the picture of Constance and Forbearance sent. It's telling. Liked how Brian is curious and is really trying to be a friend, and how Brian's Mom's rule creates a girl/guy awareness that they didn't have when they were younger.
Okay, we know Alex will not be eaten by the hag. This is good.
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Date: 2012-02-24 06:26 pm (UTC)"What?"
"The hag doesn't get her. I'm explaining to you because you look a bit nervous."
"I wasn't nervous. Maybe I was a little bit 'concerned' but that's not the same thing."