I think, so far, this has been the best written chapter of the whole book. Very evenly paced, just the right amount of action, and very well placed dialog without any overkill. Was a bit shocked at the ending. But cant wait to see this unfold in future chapters...or books! I really did enjoy this chapter. Im hoping for more action, but hey....itll come when it comes. One last thing. I think stringy should have been 86"d. Cant wait for Fridays chapter to drop.
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Daaaayyyuuuuuummm!!!!!!
Date: 2024-07-31 05:10 am (UTC)I really did enjoy this chapter. Im hoping for more action, but hey....itll come when it comes. One last thing. I think stringy should have been 86"d. Cant wait for Fridays chapter to drop.